Pulling Out Beards
Dec 15, 2015 11:13
As a result of a questionnaire to Japanese 20s-30s men, about 60 percent people pull out their beards on a daily basis.
Although it is not frequently, I also sometimes pull out my beards while thinking algorithms or math problems.
However, this habit involves much danger, such as "ingrown hair," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," "hair-pulling disorder."
Therefore, we should shave our beards using a shaver.
By the way, the best shaving time seems to be morning, because our beards are easy to grow at 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
Although it is not frequently, I also sometimes pull out my beards while thinking algorithms or math problems.
However, this habit involves much danger, such as "ingrown hair," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," "hair-pulling disorder."
Therefore, we should shave our beards using a shaver.
By the way, the best shaving time seems to be morning, because our beards are easy to grow at 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
髭抜き
日本人男性20代～30代にアンケートをとったところ、日常的に髭を抜く人は60%ほどだったそうです。
私は日常的にではありませんが、アルゴリズムなどを頭で考えるときに、たまに抜くことがあります。
しかしこの行為には、「埋没毛」や「毛のう炎」「ニキビ」「炎症」「色素沈着」「乾燥肌」「抜毛症」など危険がいっぱいです。
そのため、ちゃんと髭剃りで剃るべきだそうです。
ちなみに、髭が最も伸びやすいのは朝6時～10時であるため、朝に剃るのがベストです。
日本人男性20代～30代にアンケートをとったところ、日常的に髭を抜く人は60%ほどだったそうです。
私は日常的にではありませんが、アルゴリズムなどを頭で考えるときに、たまに抜くことがあります。
しかしこの行為には、「埋没毛」や「毛のう炎」「ニキビ」「炎症」「色素沈着」「乾燥肌」「抜毛症」など危険がいっぱいです。
そのため、ちゃんと髭剃りで剃るべきだそうです。
ちなみに、髭が最も伸びやすいのは朝6時～10時であるため、朝に剃るのがベストです。
No. 1 Oceansea's correction
- As a result of a questionnaire to Japanese 20s-30s men, about 60 percent people pull out their beards on a daily basis.
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As a result of a questionnaire to 20s-30s twenty to thirty-year-old Japanese men, about 60 percent of people pull out their beards on a daily basis.
I think this would be the most common way to say this.
- Although it is not frequently, I also sometimes pull out my beards while thinking algorithms or math problems.
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Although it is not frequent, I also sometimes pull out my beard while thinking about algorithms or math problems.
"Frequent" is an adjective. It becomes "frequently" (an adverb) when modifying a verb. It is not modifying a verb here.
I frequently go to the store.
I frequently think about math.
- However, this habit involves much danger, such as "ingrown hair," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," "hair-pulling disorder."
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However, this habit involves much danger, such as "ingrown hair," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," or "hair-pulling disorder."
Its common to put a word such as "or" or "and" before the last item in a list like this.
- Therefore, we should shave our beards using a shaver.
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Therefore, we should instead shave our beards using a shaver.
This is correct.
The word "instead" shows that the shaver is an alternative to pulling the beard out on your own.
- By the way, the best shaving time seems to be morning, because our beards are easy to grow at 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
- By the way, the best shaving time seems to be in the morning, because our beards are easy to grow at from 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
kanotown
Thank you very much again for correcting my post!
I understand well. :)
Thank you very much again for correcting my post!
I understand well. :)
No. 2 JMStewy's correction
- Pulling Out Beards
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- As a result of a questionnaire to Japanese 20s-30s men, about 60 percent people pull out their beards on a daily basis.
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According to the result of a questionnaire to Japanese 20s-30s men, about 60 percent of them pluck their beards on a daily basis.
"People" means everyone, and I bet 60% is a little high if we include women :)
- Although it is not frequently, I also sometimes pull out my beards while thinking algorithms or math problems.
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Although it is not frequently, I also sometimes pull out my beard hairs while thinking about algorithms or math problems.
Or "Although it is not frequent..."
- However, this habit involves much danger, such as "ingrown hair," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," "hair-pulling disorder."
- However, this habit involves many dangers, such as "ingrown hairs," "folliculitis," "comedo," "pigmentation," "dehydrated skin," and "hair-pulling disorder."
- Therefore, we should shave our beards using a shaver.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- By the way, the best shaving time seems to be morning, because our beards are easy to grow at 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
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By the way, the best shaving time seems to be morning, because our beards are easy to grow at 6:00 to 10:00 a.m.
I'm not quite sure what you mean with "easy to grow" here, or why that makes morning a better time to shave.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
> I'm not quite sure what you mean with "easy to grow" here, or why that makes morning a better time to shave.
Sorry for my confusing English.
I wanted to say something like "Our beards grow quickly especially in the early morning, so we have to shave in the morning."
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
> I'm not quite sure what you mean with "easy to grow" here, or why that makes morning a better time to shave.
Sorry for my confusing English.
I wanted to say something like "Our beards grow quickly especially in the early morning, so we have to shave in the morning."